Grimrock

- Intro story interesting. would prefer text lines on single page, not separate fade-ins of text
- Human description, could use a , after "peace" and a . at the end
- very cool swoosh of the character design steps!
- Love the kits! Wow!
- Knight should be "An honorable..." and "abhorres" should be "abhors"
- Assassin should be "Most of an assassin's targets..." and "poisons" and "it" don't match, choose either "poisons" and "them", or "poison" and "it"
- I chose human - male 2 - ranger - druid - aura - strong mind - "Gamok"
- eww, journal and hint icons are bright eyesores, maybe something more Grimrock flavor instead, more subtle/smaller (resolution dependent)
- toilet flush, har har
- "I don't have lost..." should be "I haven't lost..."
- poor guy, dying on the toilet!
- lactose intolerance, eww! (some flickering on the dirt against back wall there)
- found lots of dead ends, death, creepy atmosphere here, very good.
- Wow, time flies in-game, the journal has tracked 3 hours so far!
- 51 remains - "caught by death" - "death" extends beyond text box, maybe to a line break there.
- also for 51 remains, "From what I've heard" should come after "If the identity"
- got secret from clean toilet room!
- nice gates/plates prison doors mechanisms
- didn't hear any sound for "alarms"
- hmm, how to get that key from dead guard...
- stuck, what to do?
- flipped alarm levers back up, gate opened behind key guard!
- oops, tossed my weapon at a guard's bunk, now I can't reach it to get it back, can see from side it's under bunk! Reload! (maybe make a blockage?)
- "Holy Crap!" ha ha ha!
- Resurrected Sylina, heard sound played, she got a level up immediately, but no skill points to distribute
- Resurrected Eugene, no sound played, no level up for him.
- Talking - Sylina "I was friend with" should be "I was friends with" or "I was a friend to"
- Talking - Sylina "destruction effected" should be "affected"
- Talking - Sylina "good condition enough" should be "good enough condition"
- Journal - "people I was friend with" should be "people I was friends with"
- Talking - Eugene "should have saved us, went..." should not have a , just "should have save us went..."
- Journal - "need to find informations" should be "information"
- skeleton resurrected, attacking! yikes!
- have to gear up new characters, go back for discards
- nice trick, use rune on life, get haste!

oops, tossed my weapon at a guard's bunk, now I can't reach it to get it back, can see from side it's under bunk! Reload! (maybe make a blockage?)

Strangely they are already blockages... I'll check their properties thanks!

I might retry, I at first discarded the idea because the inventory and gui tricks played in the dungeon surely introduce some complexity in integrating it.

- noticed, gate will raise back up after flipping back up only one alarm lever, even if other alarm lever is still down
- skeletons at the dead ends (with banners) and the key skeleton don't revive? hmm
- in a bathroom off barracks, a toilet pull chain goes right through the wall sconce lantern, not good
- "shelter" - odd, "no one in the shelter", can't go in, hmm
- sacraficial dagger - should be "magic runes, while on the bottom of the hilt the name..." and "but the blade has opposing teeth that resist when pulling back"
- Talking - Jill "from - say - the" should just be "from, say, the"
- Talking - Jill "Orichalcum is a rare metal metal", remove one "metal"
- Talking - Jill "one of the reasons I was killed for" should just be "I was killed." get rid of "for"
- Talking - Jill "things I shouldn't have had" should just be "shouldn't have."
- Talking - Jill "influencing guards behaviour" should be "influencing guards' behavior"
- Talking - Jill "payed by them" should be "paid by them"

- alarm levers => only there for ambience value, no game role
- skeletons => they should revive.. note that they only revive when you leave them giving your back or side. If you look at them they won't revive
- "shelter" => won't spoil

I figured out to face away and step away and they all work except those three. Will try again tomorrow.

On level 2 I found a secret room and in it a secret button to a hallway. At the end of the hallway is a pit. At this point I have not found a way to cure my disease and I figured I would die, but I jumped in the pit anyways and when I should have hit and died the game crashed to desktop with no warning or error code. I did this a couple time and it crashed everytime with out fail.

those three skeletons:
- north dead end (far N of south gate)
- south dead end (just N of gate)
- skele with key

- Talking - Jill "some time than they probably got greedy, run a gate..." should be "some time, then they probably got greedy, ran a gate..."
- Talking - Jill "The minotaur used it..." should be "The minotaurs used it..."
- Talking - Jill "extremely dangerous to convey extreme amounts" should remove one of the "extreme"s, more like "quite dangerous" or "very dangerous", or "extremely dangerous to convey huge amounts"
- Talking - Jill "As they said, put the acid..." should be "As they say, put the acid..."
- Talking - Jill "cool to say so, I couldn't resist." should be "cool to say, so I couldn't resist."
- Talking - Jill "big explosion seem to have been caused" should be "big explosion seems to have been caused"
- wait a second, Jill is a MAN? I thought it was an ugly butch woman, but the journal then says "He". Should change the name, Jill is a completely female name. Maybe Jull or Joll or something different.
- Journal "many interesting informations about the gate" should be "a lot of interesting information about the gate"
- Journal "explosion seem to have been" should be "explosion seems to have been"
- Dreamland - WOW, that was pretty cool! discovered priest was framed!
- discovered water turns to healing potion on life rune!
- just noticed the dragon statues around the shrine pool fires are blocky looking, not correct smoothing on model or texture or something UV maybe, dunno
- found secret library (tome wisdom) in priest's quarters, must have been from button in dreamland?
- Note "Carry out the executions sparsed in a few days time..." should be "Spread the executions out over a few days..."
- Note "for the guards enjoyment." should be "for the guards' enjoyment."
- two wall texts "Scrictly follow" should be "Strictly follow"
- found secret in hallway to shurikens, then button to a hall to pit (but not a secret)
- hidden button to a dirty room with three skeles, found armoury key
- killed by strong spiders in death pit!

- Sign "any weapon or armour" should be "any weapons or armour"
- Item "Short_sword" should be "Short Sword"
- Note "can't bear with this job" should be "can't bear this job"
- Note "forced working" should be "forced to work"
- Note "applaude" should be "applaud"
- Note "the corpse seem to have" should be "the corpse seems to have"
- found secret chest with alchemy, nomad boots (was it a secret?)